Bad Blogger Pitch

Notice I'm addressed as "Mr. / Ms.," and I can't even tell what this woman wants from me.
I doubt she's actually looked at my blog or Website -- nothing in her email indicates she actually has.
Listing her phone numbers is good and adds credibility, but the lack of a "real" email address, just a free msn.com address, and also the misspellings, especially in the disclaimer! don't give me a nice warm feeling

I am responding -- see below. She did send it from a proper @creafi.com address so she's probably legit

Mr. / Ms.,

My name is Gabriela Cisco and I work for Creafi Communications. The reason of this e-mail is know if you have received the last e-mail I sent you a few weeks ago.

Creafi is an online advertising agency. I've checking your website, and I would like to work with you, I believe we working together would be profitable for both companies.

I would like you to think about it and tell me what you think.

Thank you very much.
Yours sincerely,

Gabriela Cisco

Phone: +54 11 5199 2237 | Mobile Phone: +54 911 6112 6208
MSN: gabycisco@hotmail.com
Skype: gabriela.cisco

Creafi Oy  -| CPH Denmark|B.A. Argentina| Seville Spain
Phone: +54 11 5199 2237 | Mobile phone: +54 911 6112 6208
Please visit our websites at: www.creafi.com 

This transmission is intended sololy for the person or entity to whom it is addressed. It may contain privileged and confidential information. If you are not the intended recipient, please be notified that any dissemination, distribution or copying is strictly prohibited. If you have received this transmission by mistake, please let us know and then delete it from your system.

Response

Gabriela,

Exactly what do you want? You message is vague and unclear.

You sent me a geneic email addressed to "Mr. / Ms.," -- if you had checked my Web site, you would have perhaps learned my name is "Ted" and addressing people by name in emails will undoubtedly increase your response rate significantly

Ted

Comments

[Reg of Elemental Truths]

Ms. Ted????

[Andrew Benton]

Hah email spam marketing box!